すが 文章で話す内容つくったので添削願えますか。 He looked at that year's hotel rankings. His starlight hotel was no.3. He said, "We need to do better." The next day, he went to the shop and asked a clerk of hotel-room items. She said, "We recommend these luxury cotton towels. A month later, he introduced new hotel-room items. The guests looked happy. The following month, he and a employer talked with each other. The employer said, "Customers have been taking our towels home." こんな感じでつくってみたのですが どうでしょうか。添削丁寧にできればお願いします 文法などご指摘ありましたらお願いします。写真投稿しようと思いましたが画像が小さくしか投稿されず文章のみで投稿しました。
