たいです! 内容、構成、語彙、文法それぞれ4点の計16点満点でお願いしたいです! TOPIC Do you think that fewer Japanese students are interested in other countries these days? POINT ・Internet◯ ・Costs ・Carrer◯ ・Foreign products ESSAY It is not true that fewer Japanese students are interested in other countries these days because many students want to go abroad, and they have a lot of chances to exposure to foreign cultures. Nowadays , the number of students who think their future is increasing. For example student who want to work abroad or work in a foreign company in the future. If they want to do like these things ,have to build up their knowledge of other countries,cultures,traditions, languages and so on. For these things, many student want to go abroad for their experience. Additionally, the internet gives student a lot of opportunities to exposure to foreign cultures. For example, they can communicate with foreign people, and watch a news of abroad on the internet. These things make students more interested in other countries. As explained above, Japanese students’ concern in other countries are improving, not decreasing.