ですがちゃんとした点数が出なかったので採点をお願いしたいです。全然できていないということは自動採点の結果でわかっています。どこを直すべきかも教えてくださると嬉しいです。 よろしくお願いします。 問題 Some people say that more apartment buildings should allow pets such as dogs and cats. Do you agree with this opinion? 私の回答 I agree with this opinion. I have two reasons why i think so. To begin with, there are a lot of pets such as dogs and cats which are abandoned by thier owner in the world. This problem because of noting home which they live and thier owner doesn't have enough houses to have pets. In addition, in recent years, people who keep pets increase. If there are a lot of such as pets , we should give them houses to live. For these reasons, I think more apartment buildings should allow pets such as dogs and cats.