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It is becoming a public concern that printed books will be replaced by e-books in the future.
I am also interested in it.
In my opinion，I agree with this idea that they will be so.
I have two reasons for it.
To begin with，people can decrease resources.
For example，paper which need to make printed books can be little.
Next，e-books is convenient for reading.
For instance，we can read books outside.
In conclusion，printed books will be replaced by e-books in the future because of their environment and convenience.

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It is becoming a public concern that printed books will be replaced by e-books in the future.
I am also interested in this topic.
In my opinion, I agree with the idea that they will be.
I have two reasons for this.
To begin with, people can conserve resources.
For example, the paper needed to make printed books can be reduced.
Next, e-books are convenient for reading.
For instance, we can read books outside.
In conclusion, printed books will be replaced by e-books in the future due to their environmental benefits and convenience.