英検のライティングにの添削をしてください。 自分は今中学二年生てわ今度英検準二級を受けるのですが、ライティングがとても…

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英検のライティングにの添削をしてください。
自分は今中学二年生てわ今度英検準二級を受けるのですが、ライティングがとても苦手です。

QuestionDo you think it is good for students to study by using a tablet computer.

My answer
I think it is good for students to study by using a tablet computer.
I have two reasons.
First, when you have a question you do not understand, you can research it if students using a tablet computer.
Second, you will be usefull in the future because you use tablet computers a lot at work. That is why it is good for students to study by using a tablet computer.

これで大丈夫なのでしょうか？
どこか直した方が良いところがあったら、言ってください。
よろしくお願いします

Answer 1

I think it is good for students to study by using a tablet computer.
I have two reasons.
First, when you have a question you do not understand, you can research it if students use a tablet computer.
Second, you will be useful in the future because you use tablet computers a lot at work. That is why it is good for students to study by using a tablet computer.