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英検2級のライティング採点よろしくお願いします。
トピックToday, some customers ask delivery companies to put packages by their doors instead of receiving them directly. Do you think this kind of service will become more common in the future?

作文
I do not think that this kind of service will become more common in the future. I have two reasons why I think so. First, that is not good for security because your food may be stolen by someone when you are not in your house. Second, some animals damage your meals. For example, dogs and cats injure your package before you take it. For these reasons , I do not believe that putting packages by their doors service will become more common in the future.

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Answer 1

I do not think that this kind of service will become more common in the future.

I have two reasons why I think so.

First, that is not good for security because your food may be stolen by someone when you are not in your house.

Second, some animals damage your meals.

For example,

dogs and cats
＝dog or cat

injure
=may break

your package before you take it.

For these reasons , I do not believe that putting packages by their doors service will become more common in the future.

95/100