英検2級ライティング採点予想お願いします。 TOPIC

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英検2級ライティング採点予想お願いします。

TOPICIt is often said that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that throw away .Do you agree with this opinion?

I agree with this opinion.I have two reasons.First,restaurants and supermarkets waste the cost of throwing away food.If they throw away,they should not produce extra food.Second,throwing away things is bad for environment.It needs to be burned if they throw away food.Burning produce much bad gas.Bad gas is not good for environment.And burning will make global warming more serious.That is why I agree with that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that throw away.

Answer 1

I agree with this opinion.I have two reasons.

First, restaurants and supermarkets waste the cost of throwing away food. If they throw away, they should not produce extra food.

Second, throwing away things is bad for (the) environment. It needs to be burned (trash burning sites) if they throw away food. (A disposal by burning produces a lot of carbon dioxide.) (It) is not good for (the) environment (and) burning will make global warming more serious. That is why I agree with that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that (are thrown) away.

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