英検準一級ライティング、企業はもっとオンラインサービスを提供すべきかというお題です。 アイデアが全く浮かばず特にcos…

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英検準一級ライティング、企業はもっとオンラインサービスを提供すべきかというお題です。
アイデアが全く浮かばず特にcostの観点では無理矢理書きましたが、こんなんでも大丈夫ですか？I think that should businesses provide more online services. There are two reasons to support my opinions.

One reason is that in terms of the environment, by using such a service, people can work from anywhere.
For example, if you feel stressed with work in your office, it is one of the good methods to use it. In addition, it can lead to a rise in their performance.

Another reason is that in terms of cost, this is a good way to decrease to need for the cost of commute. For instance, commuters spend a lot of money in a month. Therefore I can say it is good for even aspect of cost.

In conclusion, I believe that businesses should provide more online services.

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「題」の意味を取り違えているようですよ。
元の英文での「題」を書いてください。