良くてこれにしましたが、受かりませんか？ 文法の直しも教えて欲しいです。 One day, a woman was at a cafe with her mother and son. The woman was holding a cup of coffee. Her son was eating a piece of cake. The old woman pointed at the poster said Early learning brings career success. The woman decided to consult her husband. A few weeks later, the woman said to her husband "these will all be good for our son."Her husband was convinced of her idea. One month later, the woman said to her son "We're late for your swimming lesson. Her son was surprised at her word. And he was getting out from ABC English school. On the way to the pool, the woman and her son was riding their bicycle.They were looking at children who were at the park. Her son thought he wanted to play at the park. However, he had swimming lessons, so he can'tplay at the park. もし女性だったらに対しての回答は If I were the woman, I'd be thinking I shouldn't have gone English school. It is because my son's schdule is too tight. He don't have time to play.I want him to enjoy his life.
